| The first excerpt represents the element of Air. It speaks of mental influences and the process of thought, and is drawn from Dawn O'Hara, The Girl Who Laughed by Edna Ferber: marks, a liberal sprinkling of adjectives and adverbs,
and a cut of the victim gracing the top of the column.
It was long past the lunch hour when the prima donna
and the prize-fighter, properly embellished, were snapped
on the copy hook. The prima donna had chattered in
French; the prize-fighter had jabbered in slang; but the
charming old maid, who spoke Milwaukee English, was to
make better copy than a whole chorus of prima donnas, or
a ring full of fighters. Copy! It was such wonderful
stuff that I couldn't use it.
It was with the charming old maid in mind that
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The second excerpt represents the element of Fire. It speaks of emotional influences and base passions, and is drawn from The Mad King by Edgar Rice Burroughs: "You fools," he cried. "That man was not the king. I saw
him steal the king's clothes at Blentz and I followed him
here. He is the American--the impostor." Then his eyes,
circling the faces about him to note the results of his an-
nouncements, fell upon the face of the man in the red hunt-
ing coat. Amazement and wonder were in his face. Slowly
he raised his finger and pointed.
"There is the king," he said.
Every eye turned in the direction he indicated. Exclama-
tions of surprise and incredulity burst from every lip. The
old chancellor looked from the man in the red hunting coat
 The Mad King |